Hey I really like it, especially her expression in combination with her body language, the hand pattern/position with the face and her stare. The lines on the legs are an interesting pattern but I find them rather too distracting. The way I see it, they are the secondary element which contribute to the character so if they are slightly toned down you keep the interest and replace the gravity of attention back to the face. (unless you aimed for the attention to be mainly on the legs so nvmind what I just said )
Hey Niovi, this is just a photo study and I didn't really change much. You can see the real here: [link] Though, I get your point. The lines are quite bright and rather distracting. If I was to do it again, i'd definitely tone down the lines to give more focus to her torso and face. I wasn't particularly proud of the face but i'm working on it. Cheers.