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Submitted: July 30, 2012
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CW: Pirate Punk Shipby *GDSWorld

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Sci-Fi

My entry for

's 30th bi-weekly contest themed 'Punk Tech'

Inspired by the works of Scott Robertson and Ian McQue.

Time spent: 6-8 hours
Hardware: Intuos 4
Software: Photoshop CS5

Feels good to enter this competition again.

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*AndresSabastian Nov 29, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Lovely scene...Great atmosphere.

*GDSWorld Dec 4, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Thank you!

~hellbat Aug 26, 2012

Very cool!

*GDSWorld Sep 9, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Thanks Bro!

~vladgheneli Aug 3, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

I really love how you painted the buildings in the background. You used lasso tool, painted over and then erased some parts, right?
The ships also look nice but it would have been great if you would've chosen a slightly raised or lowered perspective angle, for a better understanding of the design. Right now, you can't really understand what's happening in there.

*GDSWorld Aug 25, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Hey V, only just got some time to reply to this.
Yes, I use lasso tool a lot in my work. I agree with you
on the perspective thing. I treated the foreground and the
background as different things. I should've spent more time
getting the perspective right. I'll definitely work on that
in my next piece.

Cheers!

*ricky4 Jul 31, 2012

Nice work bud!

*GDSWorld Aug 2, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Cheers Rick!

~M0nkeyBread Jul 31, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

I like this one, both in your treatment and design. You've used the contrast of colour against neutrals, you've imparted a sense of movement, shown scale and given a little bit of narrative by showing the environment enough by suggesting things rather than render them out fully. I think the "punk" design on your craft comes through nicely as well.
If I was to crit it would be on doing more differential treatment on the rendering of materials and I question the choice of side perspective for both vehicles. Another thing that comes to mind is functionality as a design...while it may be hidden I have to imagine this craft's landing apparatus and it doesn't seem entirely workable without this. The little jet antenna thing at the bottom is a little odd IMO.

There. Honest crit.

Good luck dude!

*GDSWorld Aug 2, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Hey Amit, sorry for the late reply.
I really appreciate you taking your time to write this critique.
Perspective is still my weakness and i'm working on improving that.
Rendering different types of material is also another one of my weakness at the moment.
I did this one as a fun exercise and I wanted to rest my brain on a Sunday afternoon and
so for that reason I didn't really give much thought to functionality. I just wanted to have
fun with this piece.
Really appreciate the honest crit and i'll definitely improve on these points in the near future. I have too!

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